雅思寫(xiě)作流程圖考官范文深度解析

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江湖傳說(shuō)流程圖就是洪水猛獸,有些同學(xué)看到流程圖就自動(dòng)放棄放棄考試,準(zhǔn)備下次備考了。流程圖真的有那么可怕嗎?小編為你深度解析流程圖五大特點(diǎn),實(shí)例解釋如何寫(xiě)出高分流程圖答案!流程圖不可怕,掌握方法就可以!

【考官范文及深度點(diǎn)評(píng)】

The figure illustrates the process used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to forecast the weather. 【第一段改寫(xiě),要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。流程圖必備三個(gè)詞:process:整個(gè)過(guò)程, stage:階段,step:步驟】

There are four stages in the process, beginning with the collection of information about the weather. This information is then analysed, prepared for presentation, and finally broadcast to the public.【第二段總括四個(gè)階段,運(yùn)用多樣的句式,顯示語(yǔ)言功底, 不呆板。注意beginning with,then,finally等表示順序的連接詞?!?/p>

Looking at the first and second stages of the process, there are three ways of collecting weather data and three ways of analysing it. Firstly, incoming information can be received by satellite and presented for analysis as a satellite photo. The same data can also be passed to a radar station and presented on a radar. Finally, drifting buoys also receive data which can be shown on a synoptic chart. 【大量使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài),顯示客觀性。注意使用same,also等詞不漏痕跡的過(guò)渡。使用定語(yǔ)從句將兩個(gè)句子鏈接起來(lái)】

At the third stage of the process, the weather broadcast is prepared on computers. Finally, it is delivered to the public on television, on the radio, or as a recorded telephone announcement.

【第二段已經(jīng)是總括段,不需要寫(xiě)總結(jié)?!?/p>

最后再總結(jié)一下流程圖的特點(diǎn):

【流程圖特點(diǎn)之一:介紹過(guò)程要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)】

【流程圖特點(diǎn)之二:大量使用定語(yǔ)從句,將有關(guān)聯(lián)的兩句話連接?!?/p>

【流程圖特點(diǎn)之三:大量使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)】

【流程圖特點(diǎn)之四:使用一些表示順序的連接詞】

【流程圖特點(diǎn)之五:一般不需要寫(xiě)總結(jié)】

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